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Grey Clouds - 24th May 2005, 02:25 PM

I wrote this back in '94, it's still relevant

Filling my view from my bedroom window.
Clouds of grey roll and billow across the sky, floating over the morgue, dead sky,dead people in a grey world.
When the sky is blue, sometimes we feel good.
When it's grey, the dead stay that way.
When its hot and humid, they stay cool and we living sweat and curse.
Which is worse, oh screw the world.

Ian

As a note, everyday when I look out of B/R window, I see the hospital morgue which is just over the wall. Maybe I should move ?

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24th May 2005, 09:47 PM

Well the bright side of it could be you might see souls ascending. Form death comes rebirth. I love the line "When it's grey the dead stay that way." It has depth plus the rhime scheme.
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24th May 2005, 10:40 PM

Thanks LK, it really suits my current mood. Grey.

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I'm Not Choosy..... - 24th May 2005, 10:47 PM

I'll take a room in the morgue!! Of course still alive, and with a computer hookup! Cheers~


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24th May 2005, 10:58 PM

Hey Moondog, they are very choosy whom they take, normally you have to have expired. I used to lay in bed at nights, listening to the trollys being wheeled in there. Now the Hospital has an underground tunnel, so it's silent at night.

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I'll take a room in the morgue!! Of course still alive, and with a computer hookup! Cheers~
Poor MoonDog, if the morgue looks good , what's bad?
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